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The facial expressions on MOTORCYCLE shouldn’t be there unless you are using it as a verb, which isn’t the case with this sentence. The facial expression with MY seems to be off too. I think either remove it or continue it with NEIGHBOR. Other than that, it looks good to me. Adam > On Oct 22, 2022, at 7:15 PM, Valerie Sutton <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > > SignWriting List > October 22, 2022 > > ASL Sentence > > Is this good ASL? Would you write it this way? I would love corrections… > > And I would love to see this sentence in other sign languages too! > > My neighbors have 4 children, 5 trucks and 9 motorcycles. Wow! > > > > > > > > ________________________________________________ > > SIGNWRITING LIST INFORMATION > > Valerie Sutton SignWriting List moderator [log in to unmask] <mailto:[log in to unmask]> > Post Messages to the SignWriting List: [log in to unmask] <mailto:[log in to unmask]> > SignWriting List Archives & Home Page http://www.signwriting.org/forums/swlist <http://www.signwriting.org/forums/swlist> > Join, Leave or Change How You Receive SW List Messages http://listserv.valenciacollege.edu/cgi-bin/wa?SUBED1=SW-L&A=1 <http://listserv.valenciacollege.edu/cgi-bin/wa?SUBED1=SW-L&A=1> ________________________________________________ SIGNWRITING LIST INFORMATION Valerie Sutton SignWriting List moderator [log in to unmask] Post Messages to the SignWriting List: [log in to unmask] SignWriting List Archives & Home Page http://www.signwriting.org/forums/swlist Join, Leave or Change How You Receive SW List Messages http://listserv.valenciacollege.edu/cgi-bin/wa?SUBED1=SW-L&A=1