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January 20, 2011

On Jan 20, 2011, at 9:38 AM, Adam Frost wrote:

> Personally, I read the second better than the first try. I didn't notice that there was an upward crawl. It felt more like things were being stacked on top of each other. 
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> Adam

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Charles -
this is a very nice piece of writing - thank you for sharing with us

Great to hear from you, Adam - I agree with Adam - the second one shows the movement up...without that I would never have known you were moving up at all...

In your writing, the Shoulder Line has a darker section closer to the reader - that means that the shoulders are twisted to face the front corner (see in my attached diagram numbers 2 and 4 are shoulders facing the front corner.... the darker section means the shoulder that is closest to the reader..








Instead you may want to have the Tilted Shoulders which slant too, but they do not have a darker section - they are number 5, 6, 7, and 8 in the attached...



Val ;-)

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