Personally, I read the second better than the first try. I didn't notice that there was an upward crawl. It felt more like things were being stacked on top of each other. Adam On Jan 19, 2011, at 11:09 PM, "Charles Butler" <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > > (Without movement) > > > > (With movement) > > Which of the above is clearer? This is the sign for sloth (a Brazilian animal that climbs trees). The shoulders move down and the eyes shift to mark the movement.